family dinner

2022-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I had dinner with my family last week, because its my father\'s birthday We shared delectable meal at the italian restaurant. but you know what? it was my father\'s birthday but i choose the restaurant as i like. its weird anyway in that day, We talked about my plan, i mean, my plan after my gradulation while having our meal. hmm its so hard time for me, because that topic always makes me nervouse. i like that restaruant cusine\'s taste and also restaurant interior but honestly our talk topic is not that good for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Robin!
I get your idea. Learn the grammar patterns in English so it will be easier for you to express yourself in the right way. Keep on learning! ^_^

~T. Maine

I had dinner with my family last week, because its my father\'s birthday

>>I had dinner with my family last week because it was my father\'s birthday.
We shared delectable meal at the italian restaurant.

>>We shared a delectable meal at an Italian restaurant.

but you know what? it was my father\'s birthday but i choose the restaurant as i like.

>>But you know what? It was my father\'s birthday at that time but I chose the restaurant I like.
its weird

>> It sounded weird.
anyway in that day, We talked about my plan, i mean, my plan after my gradulation while having our meal.

>>Anyway on that day, we talked about my plan after my graduation while having our meal.
hmm its so hard time for me, because that topic always makes me nervouse.

>> It\'s so hard for me because that topic made me nervous.

i like that restaruant cusine\'s taste and also restaurant interior but honestly our talk topic is not that good for me.

>>I like that restaurant\'s cuisine because of its taste and also the restaurant\'s interior is nice. But honestly, our topic was not that good for me.

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