Family Dinner

2011-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

before three days , it's thanks giving day. (추석) so we ate together at grandmother home. we ate meets, song-pyun, and the other foods. It was very taste. Maybe I think that The whole family got together . we cooked together. so Everythings finished earlier than anticipated. even though , my younger is a solider. so he wasn't come in house. Anyway we spent a pleasamt day in the country. but,... I think little fat...? : D

강사 첨삭

Hi That sounds great! I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed your Holiday. Family get together is one of the most treasured moments in one's life and I am glad that you shared this with me. Take care! ^.^   CORRECTIONS! before three days , its thanks giving day. >> Three days ago was Thanksgiving Day.so we ate together at grandmother home.>> We ate at my grandmother's house. we ate meets, song-pyun, and the other foods.>> We ate meat, Song-pyun and other foods. It was very taste. Maybe >> It was very tasty. I think that The whole family got together . >> I think that we all got together we cooked together. >> CORRECT! so Everythings finished earlier than anticipated.>> We finished earlier than expected. even though , my younger is a solider. so he wasn't come in house. >> My younger brother is a soldier and he was not able to go to my grandparent's house. Anyway we spent a pleasamt day in the country.but,...I think little fat...? : D >> Anyway, we had a pleasant day in the country but  I think I became a little fat. :D

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