Family Dinner
학생이 쓴 원문
before three days , it's thanks giving day. (추석)
so we ate together at grandmother home.
we ate meets, song-pyun, and the other foods.
It was very taste. Maybe I think that The whole family got together .
we cooked together. so Everythings finished earlier than anticipated.
even though , my younger is a solider. so he wasn't come in house.
Anyway we spent a pleasamt day in the country.
but,...
I think little fat...? : D
강사 첨삭
Hi
That sounds great! I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed your Holiday.
Family get together is one of the most treasured moments in one's life and I am glad that you shared this with me.
Take care! ^.^
CORRECTIONS!
before three days , its thanks giving day.
>> Three days ago was Thanksgiving Day.so we ate together at grandmother home.>> We ate at my grandmother's house.
we ate meets, song-pyun, and the other foods.>> We ate meat, Song-pyun and other foods.
It was very taste. Maybe >> It was very tasty.
I think that The whole family got together .
>> I think that we all got together
we cooked together.
>> CORRECT!
so Everythings finished earlier than anticipated.>> We finished earlier than expected.
even though , my younger is a solider. so he wasn't come in house.
>> My younger brother is a soldier and he was not able to go to my grandparent's house.
Anyway we spent a pleasamt day in the country.but,...I think little fat...? : D
>> Anyway, we had a pleasant day in the country but I think I became a little fat. :D
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