Family Gathering 1
학생이 쓴 원문
E Composition
1. With you by my side, I can spend dome quality time.
2. With my husband, I can easily overcome my pain.
3. With teacher's help, our plan will succeed.
4. With a team like this, we can enjoy the game!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Thank you for doing well in your composition.
Keep up the good work. Enjoy your weekend!
I'll see you again on Monday!
-Teacher Verna-
E Composition
1. With you by my side, I can spend dome quality time.
>>1. With you by my side, I can spend some quality time.
2. With my husband, I can easily overcome my pain.
2. With my husband, I can easily overcome my pain.
>>Correct
3. With teacher's help, our plan will succeed.
3. With teacher's help, our plan will succeed.
>>Correct
>>With the teacher's help our plan will succeed.
4. With a team like this, we can enjoy the game!!
4. With a team like this, we can enjoy the game!!
>>Correct
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