family gathering

hello I'm [이름] ^^ I find textbook and homework today. from now, I do my homework well. -- I like the word 'family' when we gather on weekends or holiyday, I am very happy. when I was young I went to east sea with my family. that is wonderul memory. I ate delicious food and played with family on sea. nowadays, I can't gather often because I have many works to study for good job. after I getting a job, I will go to travel with family.

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I am happy that you will be participating in doing your homework. This would help you improve your speaking skills. Keep it up! Seeyou tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: hello I\'m [이름] ^^>>Hello! This is [이름].^^I find textbook and homework today. >>I found the textbook and homework. from now, I do my homework well.>>From now on, I will do my homework well.I like the word \'family\' >>Correct!when we gather on weekends or holiyday, I am very happy. >>Spelling: HOLIDAYwhen I was young I went to east sea with my family. >>When I was young, me and my family went to the east sea.that is wonderul memory. >>That was a wonderful memory.I ate delicious food and played with family on sea. >> I ate delicious food and played with my family on the sea.nowadays, I can\'t gather often because I have many works to study for good job. >>Nowadays, I can't join the family gathering because I have a lot of work to do to get a good job.after I getting a job, I will go to travel with family. >>After I get a job, I will go and travel with my family.