Family gathering
학생이 쓴 원문
Since my father has a few siblings, we usually spend more time with my mother's siblings.
We sometimes took short trips to my mother's hometown, or uncles' places.
Through these trips, we could have precious memories.
But, these days, we don't see each other like we used to do.
We are too busy to meet so we can see each other only during National holidays.
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Since my father has few siblings, we usually spend more time with my mother's siblings.
>> CorrectWe sometimes took short trips to my mother's hometown, or uncles' places.
>> CorrectThrough these trips, we could have precious memories.
>> CorrectBut, these days, we don't see each other like we used to do.
>> CorrectWe are too busy to meet so we can see each other only during National holidays.
>>Correct
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