family gathering
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Yen!
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~~Teacher Kate
1. we also gater when we have an event like wedding, first birthday party, grandfather\'s birthday.
>>>We also gather when we hold events like weddings, first birthday parties, and my grandfather\'s birthday.
2. my cousin,older brother, is marrying this saturday.
so i will meet extended family this weekend.
>>>My older cousin is getting married this Saturday so I will meet with my extended family this weekend.
3. in my grandfather\'s birthday, we usually reserve restaurant.so we gather in there.
>>>On my grandfather\'s birthday, we usually make reservations in a restaurant so we gather there.
4. afthere dinner, we sleep in grandfatehr\'s house together.
>>>After dinner, we sleep in grandfather\'s house together.
5. that day we have a lot of time to talk about our daily life. so i like all kind of the event.
>>>On that day, we have a lot of time to talk about our daily lives, so I like these kinds of events.
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