Family Introduction
학생이 쓴 원문
My family is from Busan Korea.
I have a brother and he is 29 years old.
My parents are public servants.
I have no sister.
강사 첨삭
Chang Woo,
I뭢 glad that you wrote something on this board. I tried to check it. Well, all of your sentences were correct. I just made some suggestions for the other sentences. I hope to find more of your written articles here. ^^
Have a great weekend!
xoxo,
Jenny
PS. This is my e-mail address: [이메일]. E-mail me if you have any questions or just anything..^^
Here it is:
My family is from Busan, Korea.
>> Correct.
>> OR: My family is from Busan in Korea.
I have a brother and he is 29 years old.
>> Correct.
My parents are public servants.
>> Correct.
I have no sister.
>> Correct.
>>OR: I don뭪 have a sister.
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