Family Introduction

2009-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

학생이 쓴 원문

My family is from Busan Korea. I have a brother and he is 29 years old. My parents are public servants. I have no sister.

강사 첨삭

Chang Woo, I뭢 glad that you wrote something on this board. I tried to check it. Well, all of your sentences were correct.  I just made some suggestions for the other sentences. I hope to find more of your written articles here. ^^ Have a great weekend!   xoxo, Jenny PS. This is my e-mail address: [이메일]. E-mail me if you have any questions or just anything..^^                                                                                                                            Here it is:   My family is from Busan, Korea. >> Correct. >> OR: My family is from Busan in Korea. I have a brother and he is 29 years old. >> Correct. My parents are public servants. >> Correct. I have no sister. >> Correct. >>OR: I don뭪 have a sister.                                                                                          

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