family outing or vacation. What did you learn from the experience?

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Tell me about a family outing or vacation. What did you learn from the experience? Unfortunately, I don\'t have the experience a Family outing. I have a good experience my friends that I was travel.

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Hello there Ms. [Name]! Thank you very much for doing your homework.
I will talk to you later.
T. Gracelyn

Unfortunately, I don\'t have the experience a Family outing.
>>Unfortunately, I don\'t have any experience having a family outing or vacation with my family.
I have a good experience my friends that I was travel.
>>However, I experienced traveling with my friends.

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