family planning
학생이 쓴 원문
I am planning to have a baby from this month.
I know it will be difficult to take care of two children but this decision is purely for firstborn.
Actually I and my husband want to live with three of us happily but we suddenly though that we have to make lifelong friend for my baby.
If we have one more baby it will be doubly hard but be worthwhile double.
I am looking forward to the day when i have 4members in my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I think I am more excited than you. (Hahaha)
I am looking forward to hearing that news from you.
Anyway, enjoy your time with your family.
~Teacher Chloe
I am planning to have a baby from this month.
>>Correct! I know it will be difficult to take care of two children but this decision is purely for firstborn.
>>I know it will be difficult to take care of two children but this decision is purely for those who only have one child. Actually I and my husband want to live with three of us happily but we suddenly though that we have to make lifelong friend for my baby.
>>Actually, my husband and I wanted to live with our one child, only the three of us happily but we suddenly thought that we have to make our child happier by giving her siblings.
If we have one more baby it will be doubly hard but be worthwhile double.
>>If we would have one more baby, the effort will be doubled. I am looking forward to the day when i have 4members in my family.
>>I am looking forward to having one more member in our family.
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