Family responsibilities, zombi movie.

2022-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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In your country are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to their families? In traditional korea culture, many mother just stayed at home for do the house work. It was a responsibilities of a mother. But, there was a change of the view in gender. So, many woman could study in school. So, they could work in company. But, still many old people like a boy than a girl as a grandchild. I think that many stereotypes of gender are bricked. Al least, me and my husband doesn\'t have a sterotypes. But, my mother wanted to get a boy. So, she gave birth to four people for get a boy. My [이름]er brother is the result of my mom\'s hope. -I like to watch the zombi drama. When I watch the zombi drama, I always think that I could do better than actor for life. But, when I do the zombi game, I\'m freezing. -Did you start to watch season 1 of walking dead? The walking dead shows really the human nature. That drama is quite realism. -The marble has a solid plot.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one and the culture you have in your country.
See you tomorrow!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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In traditional korea culture, many mother just stayed at home for do the house work. 
>> In traditional Korean culture, many mothers just stayed at home to do the housework. 
It was a responsibilities of a mother. 
>> It was the responsibilities of a mother.  
But, there was a change of the view in gender. 
>> Correct! 
So, many woman could study in school. 
>> So, many women could study in school. 
So, they could work in company. 
>> Correct! 
But, still many old people like a boy than a girl as a grandchild. 
>> Correct! 
I think that many stereotypes of gender are bricked. 
>> Correct! 
Al least, me and my husband doesn\'t have a sterotypes. 
>> Al least, me and my husband don\'t have a stereotype. 
But, my mother wanted to get a boy. 
>> Correct! 
So, she gave birth to four people for get a boy. 
>> So, she gave birth to four people to get a boy.  OR So, she gave birth to four people to get a son.
My [이름]er brother is the result of my mom\'s hope.
>> Correct! 

-I like to watch the zombi drama. 
>> I like to watch the zombie drama. 
When I watch the zombi drama, I always think that I could do better than actor for life. 
>> When I watch the zombie drama, I always think that I could do better than the actor in real life. 
But, when I do the zombi game, I\'m freezing.
>> But, when I do the zombie game, I\'m freezing.
-Did you start to watch season 1 of walking dead? 
>> Correct! 
The walking dead shows really the human nature. 
>> The walking dead shows the real the human nature. 
That drama is quite realism.
>> That drama is quite realistic. 
-The marble has a solid plot.
>> -The Marvel series has a solid plot.


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