Famous historical places in Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many famous historical places in my country.
Let me introduce a few places.
1. 경복궁(Gyeongbokgung)
This place is famous where the Choseon Dynasty king lived.
2. 남한산성(Namhansanseong Fortress)
There is a place where my country was at war with other country.
3. 한산도(Hansando Island)
This place was located in 경상남도(Gyeongsangnamdo) and It is a place where 이순신장군(Admiral Yi Sun-shin) in Choseon Dynasty fought against Japan.
4. 독도(Dokdo Island)
It is an island that we, Korean must protect from other countries.
5. 경주(Gyeongju)
It is famous for there are many national treasures.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름] Ha!
Thank you for sharing Ms. [이름] Ha. You still have lots of historical places. :) I hope your generation will protect it for the next generation.
~Lucy
1. 경복궁(Gyeongbokgung)
This place is famous where the Choseon Dynasty king lived.
This place is famous where the Choseon Dynasty king lived.
>>CORRECT!
2. 남한산성(Namhansanseong Fortress)
There is a place where my country was at war with other country.
2. 남한산성(Namhansanseong Fortress)
There is a place where my country was at war with other country.
>>There is the place where my country had a war with other countries.
3. 한산도(Hansando Island)
This place was located in 경상남도(Gyeongsangnamdo) and It is a place where 이순신장군(Admiral Yi Sun-shin) in Choseon Dynasty fought against Japan.
This place was located in 경상남도(Gyeongsangnamdo) and It is a place where 이순신장군(Admiral Yi Sun-shin) in Choseon Dynasty fought against Japan.
>>CORRECT!
4. 독도(Dokdo Island)
It is an island that we, Korean must protect from other countries.
4. 독도(Dokdo Island)
It is an island that we, Korean must protect from other countries.
>>CORRECT!
5. 경주(Gyeongju)
It is famous for there are many national treasures.
5. 경주(Gyeongju)
It is famous for there are many national treasures.
>>CORRECT!
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