Fantastic trip.
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Nice trip!^^ Hope you could go there again. Here are your corrections: -teacher JM
The day before yesterday, I went to trip with my friend Jeannie and two girls who were from LA.
>>>The day before yesterday, I went to a trip with my friend Jeannie and two girls who were from LA.
We finally arrived at "Any Pension".
>>>Correct
Actually, we wanted to go to "Gangwon Land", but sadly Jeannie has to go to school early.
>>>Actually, we wanted to go to "Gangwon Land", but sadly, Jeannie had to go to school early.
Well, "Any Pension" was really great too.
>>>Correct
There was one big swimming pool.
>>>Correct
Also we were going to stay in 2 floors house.
>>>Also we were going to stay in a two-story house.
It was really cool and I was very exciting!!
>>>It was really cool and I was very excited!!
We played for a long time in the pool.
>>>Correct
For dinner, we ate a delicious food and some marshmellow.
>>>For dinner, we ate a delicious food and some marshmallows.
I really want to go there next time.
>>>Correct
>>>Better: I really want to go back there next time.
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