Fantasy, and telekinesis!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I looked up the types of superpowers on the Internet, and there were 46 superpowers. Of course there are more, right?? First of all, I make it to just 6 here. Mind reading, teleportation, aeronics, time control, fantasy, and telekinesis. I picked two out of these six. It\'s fantasy and telekinesis. Fantasies make dreams come true, and telekinesis is the ability to manipulate objects. To be honest, I chose fantasy because time control can do enough with fantasy, and telekinesis it can break things just by looking at it, and it is a great help when making something. If I really had this ability, I would play alone in my fantasy, and I would use my telekinesis to help people when falling objects or dangerous situations come.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
Good power choices you\'ve got here! Fantasy can become real and things can move only by the power of your mind- these things can actually happen if you have trained yourself well to work hard on your dreams and if you become a CEO and everyone around you works instead of you.
But I agree, having these powers in real life must be awesome, some sort of X-Men!
Thanks for this!
See you later.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Of course there are more, right?? First of all, I make it to just 6 here.
>> Correct!
Or: Of course there are more, right? First of all, I made it to just 6 here.
Mind reading, teleportation, aeronics, time control, fantasy, and telekinesis.
>> Correct!
I picked two out of these six. It\'s fantasy and telekinesis.
>> Correct!
Fantasies make dreams come true, and telekinesis is the ability to manipulate objects.
>> Correct!
To be honest, I chose fantasy because time control can do enough with fantasy, and telekinesis it can break things just by looking at it, and it is a great help when making something.
>> Correct!
If I really had this ability, I would play alone in my fantasy, and I would use my telekinesis to help people when falling objects or dangerous situations come.
>> Correct!
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