Farmer
학생이 쓴 원문
Why are farmers important in every country?
Farming industry is a base of national industry.
In any country, main meal should be produced in own contry.
If any country depends on other country\'s production, this country will lose their independece.
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [Name]!
Definitely. :)
~Lucy
Farming industry is a base of national industry.
>>CORRECT!
In any country, main meal should be produced in own contry.
>>In any country, main meal should be produced in its own country.
If any country depends on other country\'s production, this country will lose their independece.
If any country depends on other country\'s production, this country will lose their independece.
>>If any country depends on other country\'s production, this country will lose their independence.
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