Fascinates Me Most
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] What is one thing that fascinates you most? Why?
I think It\'s Chinese.
Almost my friends can\'t speak chinese.
So I think chinese fascinates me most.
I like learning chinese and concentrate to the class.
My target is to talk with native speaker.
And I want to go China and speak chinese fluently.
I think speaking chinese fascinates me most!
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
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Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What is one thing that fascinates you most? Why?
I think It\'s Chinese.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: If you asked me, I\'d say it\'s Chinese.
Almost my friends can\'t speak chinese.
>> Almost all my friends can\'t speak Chinese. [Make sure to capitalize nationalities or names of countries.^^]
>> or: Almost all my friends can\'t speak the language.
So I think chinese fascinates me most.
>> So I think Chinese fascinates me most.
>> or: That\'s why Chinese fascinates me most.
I like learning chinese and concentrate to the class.
>> I enjoy learning Chinese and can concentrate when I\'m in the class.
My target is to talk with native speaker.
>> My target is to talk with native speakers.
And I want to go China and speak chinese fluently.
>> Also, I want to go to China and speak Chinese fluently.
I think speaking chinese fascinates me most!
>> I think speaking Chinese fascinates me most!
>> or: For these reasons, Chinese fascinates me most!
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