fashion.
학생이 쓴 원문
Our company allows employees to wear any clothes as long as It is not too procative like miniskirts
So when I go to work, I wear casual clothes like T-shirts,a Jean and sneakers.
In my holiday, I care my apperance more.
As for me I like to wear some clothes that suits me perfectly.
My favorite fashion style is to wear slim shirts and pants.
I think that made me look fashionable and more charming.
강사 첨삭
I wonder how you look like and I wonder how your fashionable clothes look on you.
Here are your correction: -Teacher JM
Our company allows employees to wear any clothes as long as It is not too procative like miniskirts
>>>Our company allows employees to wear any clothes as long as long as our clothes are not too procative like miniskirtsSo when I go to work, I wear casual clothes like T-shirts,a Jean and sneakers.
>>>So when I go to work, I wear casual clothes like T-shirts, jeans and sneakers.In my holiday, I care my apperance more.
>>>During my holidays, I would care about my apperance more.As for me I like to wear some clothes that suits me perfectly.
>>>As for me, I like to wear clothes that suit me perfectly.My favorite fashion style is to wear slim shirts and pants.
>>>My favorite fashion style is to wear slim shirts and pants.I think that made me look fashionable and more charming.
>>>Correct
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