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Our company allows employee to wear any clothes
>> Our company allows its employees to wear any clothes.
as long as it is not too provocative like a miniskirt or a sandal.
>>Correct
When I go to work , I like to wear casual clothes like
a Jean,a plain t-shirt and sneakers.
>> When I go to work , I like to wear casual clothes like jeans, plain t-shirt and sneakers.
It is good because wearing a suit makes me annoying and uncomfortable.
>> I t is because wearing a suit annoys me and make me feel uncomfortable.
But, we have to wear dust proof clothes in the factory.
>> Correct
It is made of polyester.
>> Correct
and we shouldn't expose our skin and hair.
>> We also shouldn’t expose our skin and hair.
Since we make semiconductor , dust control is really important.
>> Since we make semiconductors, dust control is really important.
Dust affects the quality of semiconductor.
>> Dust affects the quality of semiconductors.
Until last year , we wore a mask.
>> Last year, we had to wear masks.
and it was really stuffy.
>> It was really stuffy.
But nowadays, the restriction of a dust control has been loose.
>> But nowadays, the restriction for dust control was implemented.
So we don't wear a mask anymore.
>> So, we don’t wear masks anymore.
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