Fashionable
학생이 쓴 원문
I think personality is best after all for the fact that what\'s trendy lasts for a short time. I think doing it because it\'s fashionable, wearing it because it\'s fashionable, and buying it because it\'s fashionable is over-consumption and impatience. Even if I don\'t have to wear trendy clothes, people will look at me the same way.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think personality is best after all for the fact that what\'s trendy lasts for a short time.
>>> CORRECT!
I think doing it because it\'s fashionable, wearing it because it\'s fashionable, and buying it because it\'s fashionable is over-consumption and impatience.
>>> CORRECT!
Even if I don\'t have to wear trendy clothes, people will look at me the same way.
>>> CORRECT!
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