fast food
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I think the problem of fast food is that it transforms food. People argue about whether vegetables or meats are healthy, but I believe that if we eat food in its original form, everything can be good for health.
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I think the problem of fast food is that it transforms food.
>>>CORRECT~!^^
OR>>I believe the problem with fast food is that it alters the natural composition of food.
People argue about whether vegetables or meat are healthy, but I believe that if we eat food in its original form, everything can be good for health.
>>>CORRECT~!^^
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