father

2014-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

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Are fathers capable of carrying out the duties of a mother and vice versa? in my opinion it can be possible some of part but other of part that can not completely do everything. For example, fathers can not feed immediately mother's milk to babies however fathers can use the powder milk to them. Fathers will not be like mothers but they can capable of carrying out the duties using many different ways.

강사 첨삭

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Nice one! Thank you for doing your homework. But you have to work on your grammar.kkk..^^

Your ideas can be reflected in your sentences. Keep on doing your best.

Nanen Halsu itah!

 

See you later.

-T.Noami^^

 

Are fathers capable of carrying out the duties of a mother and vice versa?

>>correct
in my opinion it can be possible some of part but other of part that can not completely do everything.

>>In my opinion, it can be possible in some areas but not in everything.

For example, fathers can not feed immediately mother\'s milk to babies however fathers can use the powder milk to them.

>>For example, fathers can not immediately feed babies. Fathers should make use of powdered milk for them. Unlike for mothers they can feed babies immediately.

Fathers will not be like mothers but they can capable of carrying out the duties using many different ways.

>>Fathers will not be like mothers but they are capable of carrying out other duties in many different ways.

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