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Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your favorite mythical creature and why?
I like Unicorn.
I like Mermaids too but In series, Mermaids are described like a monster.
I like Unicorn because it is pretty and adorable.
It have horns and in some books, it have wings.
I like Unicorns~! ^-^ : )
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Hi there, Clair!
Here\'s your first homework!
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Jean~
Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your favorite mythical creature and why?
I like Unicorn.
>> I like unicorns.
I like Mermaids too but In series, Mermaids are described like a monster.
>> I like mermaids, too but in a series I read, mermaids were described as monsters.
I like Unicorn because it is pretty and adorable.
>> I like unicorns because they look pretty and adorable.
It have horns and in some books, it have wings.
>> They have horns and in some books, they have wings.
I like Unicorns~! ^-^ : )
>> or: I love unicorns!
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