favorite amusement park rides

2023-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite amusement park rides list is 1. wood coaster( lt is famouse roller coaster in korea. and my favorite amusement park ride! again, again l try it. ) 2. water ride ( l take a water ride only in summer.) 3. Bumper cars ( when l rest, l take a bumper cars. l think, l am very good driver.)

강사 첨삭

Hi Se In!^^

I put roller coaster but I would never try it again! haha

It was too terrifying!

Next week, we will try the water drop.

I might chicken out!

Andrea

1. wood coaster( lt is famouse roller coaster in korea. and my favorite amusement park ride! again, again l try it. )

>> wood coaster( lt is famouse roller coaster in korea. and my favorite amusement park ride! again, again l try it. )

2. water ride ( l take a water ride only in summer.)

>> water ride ( I only try water rides on summer. )

3. Bumper cars ( when l rest, l take a bumper cars. l think, l am very good driver.)

>> Bumper cars ( When l want to rest, l take bumper cars. l think, l am a very good driver.)

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