Favorite Artist.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually I don't like art.
So far It is boring to me.
But I know some artist who is very famous in the world.
His name is Pail Nam Jun.
and He passed away last year.
He made big robots out of electronics wire and component.
Since he was famous in the world, He usually had an exhibition
in foreign country.
Anyway I am proud that he was korean.
강사 첨삭
Nice answer.:) Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM
Actually I don't like art.
>>>Actually, I don't like art.
So far It is boring to me.
So far It is boring to me.
>>>So far, It's been boring for me.
>>>So far, I've been finding art quite boring.
But I know some artist who is very famous in the world.
But I know some artist who is very famous in the world.
>>>But I know an artist who is very famous in the world.
His name is Pail Nam Jun.
His name is Pail Nam Jun.
>>>Correct
and He passed away last year.
>>>He passed away last year.
He made big robots out of electronics wire and component.
>>>He made big robots out of electronic wires and components.
Since he was famous in the world, He usually had an exhibition
in foreign country.
Since he was famous in the world, He usually had an exhibition
in foreign country.
>>>Since he was famous in the world, he usually had exhibitions
in foreign countries.
>>>Correct
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