FAVORITE ENGLISH WORD

2012-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear Teacher Cam I'm so tired because I met my firend on yesterday. My friend and I spent three hours to chatting. We went to 501 beer's house in Haundae. There was many people in there. 501 beer's house had making beer. I was surprise. I didn't like beer but I drank beer. I doint drink a lot but drank deeply. Yesterday is funny day for me. My homework. My favorite Englich word is Have. Have has people's relationship. Have has people's quality. Have has people's courage. Many people say "have" every day, every time. Have is special word in the world. Because I believe have is meaningful. So, I like this word.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름] thank you so much for dropping by to make your homework..:) I always appreciate you doing your best in our class and like wise doing your homework all the time.. Anyway, talk to you again on Monday and have a good weekend.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear Teacher CamI\'m so tired because I met my firend on yesterday.>>correct..Observe proper spelling of the word FRIEND My friend and I spent three hours to chatting. >>My friend and I spent 3 hoirs chatting.We went to 501 beer\'s house in Haundae. >>correctThere was many people in there. >>There were many people there.501 beer\'s house had making beer. >>We can find lotd of beer in 501 Beer\'s house.I was surprise. >>I was so surprised!I didn\'t like beer but I drank beer. >>correctI doint drink a lot but drank deeply. >>correct..Observe proper spelling of the word DIDNTYesterday is funny day for me.>>Yesterday was a fun day for me.My homework.>>correctMy favorite Englich word is Have.>>correct..Observe proper spelling of the word ENGLISHHave has people\'s relationship. >>correctHave has people\'s quality. >>correctHave has people\'s courage.>>correct Many people say \"have\" every day, every time.>>Many people say that we should use Have everyday, everytime. Have is special word in the world.>>correctBecause I believe have is meaningful.>>correct So, I like this word. >>correct

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