Favorite food

2011-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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My favorite food is Kimchi. It is our traditional food loved by all korean. I can't imagine my meal without Kimchi. and It is getting popular all over the world. Coz it has a good flavor and nutritious. It was selected as 10 healthy food in the world by N.Y times. We have different kinds of kimchi depending on the season. Above all, my favorite one is Kimjang Kimchi. Since I have eaten Kimchi for a long time , I get used to eating it. That's why I eat kimchi everyday.

강사 첨삭

My dear [이름], Thank you so much for dropping in your composition..^^ Very impressive writing skill my dear, keep up the good work! Anyway, I'll talk to you later okay? Teacher Cam   My favorite food is Kimchi. >>correct! It is our traditional food loved by all korean. >>correct! I can't imagine my meal without Kimchi. >>correct! and It is getting popular all over the world. >>correct! Coz it has a good flavor and nutritious. >>correct! >>Because it is nutritious and has good flavor. It was selected as 10 healthy food in the world by N.Y times. >>correct! We have different kinds of kimchi depending on the season. >>correct! Above all, my favorite one is Kimjang Kimchi. >>correct! Since I have eaten Kimchi for a long time , I get used to eating it. >>correct! That's why I eat kimchi everyday. >> Correct!

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