Favorite god
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I like god dionysos.Because he is the god of richness and wine. So I like wine and richness. When I am with him I would be happy maybe.
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Hi [이름] [이름]!^^
I am not good in Greek Mythology. hahaha
I only know Poseidon because of the movie.
People say that Greek mythology is interesting but not for me. :)
Andrea
I like god dionysos.Because he is the god of richness and wine.
>> I like Dionysus because he is the god of richness and wine.
So I like wine and richness. When I am with him I would be happy maybe.
>> I like richness and win so if every I will be with him, I may feel happy.
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