favorite holiday

My favorite holidays are things-giving, new year, and Christmas. They are the most important and biggest holidays in Korea. On the holidays, all family members get together, catch up, and visit their ancestor’s tomb with food. But regardless of a specific holiday, it is fine to me as long as there are many holidays or longer holidays. Although we have to work hard, we also need holidays so that we can take some rest and get refreshed. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!! Go out and have fun with your family.

Hi Sir [이름]^^ I enjoyed reading this composition for yours. Great job! You were able to express yourself well. I like New Year too.Tell me more about your favorite holidays later. I am interested about this topic. You\'re right that you workers should have a holiday too. Enjoying time with family is really fun and important.See you later! Great start for this week! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: My favorite holidays are things-giving, new year, and Christmas. >> My favorite holidays are Thanksgiving, New Year, and Christmas day. (Be careful with the spelling of the words Thanksgiving.)^^ They are the most important and biggest holidays in Korea. >> Correct!On the holidays, all family members get together, catch up, and visit their ancestor’s tomb with food. >> During holidays,all family members get together to catch up and visit their ancenstor\'s tomb with food.But regardless of a specific holiday, it is fine to me as long as there are many holidays or longer holidays. >> But regardless of a specific holiday, it is fine for me as long as there are a lot of holidays or longer holidays. Although we have to work hard, we also need holidays so that we can take some rest and get refreshed. >> Although we have to work hard, we also need holidays so that we can take some rest and feel refreshed. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!! >> Correct! Go out and have fun with your family. >> Correct!