Favorite Magical Adventures
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Theme : [ESSAY] What\'s your favorite magical adventure movie/drama/book? Why?
I think It is .
It is about Changdeokgung.
A girl named Ju-Ri goes into a fantazi place named \'Moonlight Palace\'.
But Mrs.Me-Hua tried to dominate the Moonlight Palace.
So, It\'s about Ju-Ri\'s adventure to save the Moonlight Palace.
I think the movie is my favorite adbenture movie!
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Theme : [ESSAY] What\'s your favorite magical adventure movie/drama/book? Why?
I think It is .
>> I believe your sentence is incomplete. You didn\'t write the name of the movie.
It is about Changdeokgung.
>> correct~~
A girl named Ju-Ri goes into a fantazi place named \'Moonlight Palace\'.
>> A girl named Ju-Ri goes into a fantasy place named \'Moonlight Palace\'. [Note the correct spelling of the word \"fantasy\".]
But Mrs. [Name]-Hua tried to dominate the Moonlight Palace.
>> But Mrs. [Name]-Hua tried to rule the Moonlight Palace.
>> or: However, Mrs. [Name]-Hua tried to take control of the Moonlight Palace.
It\'s about Ju-Ri\'s adventure to save the Moonlight Palace.
>> or: So this movie is about Ju-Ri\'s adventure to save the Moonlight Palace.
I think the movie is my favorite adbenture movie!
>> This movie is probably my favorite adventure movie! [Note the correct spelling of the word \"adventure\".]
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