favorite movie

2012-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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My favorite movie is the devil wears prada. It's so interesting enough to buy DVD. And I watched that movie more than 3 times. When I watch that movie I can feel sympathy toward the main actress Miranda and Andrea. Everybody has his own goal and just try to reach for that. But that can hurt others and make unintended result. Whenever I watch that movie, I think over why she does that and are there any alternatives? That's why I love that move.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, [이름]! Wow!  You like that movie? I love that too! Well, basically I love the movie because of their clothes, bags and shoes ( I can\'t help it, I\'m a woman!).  But anyway, you will learn a lot in that movie, like for example not to judge others because of their physical appearance and a lot more. I\'ve seen that movie a lot of times, too. Anyway, thank you for doing your composition. Please take care and I\'ll talk  to you again on Monday. Have a wonderful weekend! My favorite movie is the devil wears prada. >>CORRECT It\'s so interesting enough to buy DVD. >>It\'s so interesting that I even bought a DVD. And I watched that movie more than 3 times. >>I watched that movie for more than 3 times.When I watch that movie I can feel sympathy toward the main actress Miranda and Andrea. >>When I watch that movie, I can feel sympathy towards the main actresses, Miranda and Andrea.Everybody has his own goal and just try to reach for that. >>CORRECT >>Everybody has his own goal that they would try to reach for someday. But that can hurt others and make unintended result. >>It can hurt others and produce results that are not intended.Whenever I watch that movie, I think over why she does that and are there any alternatives? >>CORRECT That\'s why I love that move. >>That\'s why I love that movie.  

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