Favorite part of myself
학생이 쓴 원문
I wouldn\'t think about myself often something like what I wanted, what I\'m good at, or what I love to. It\'s so awkward to ask myself about me. But if you don\'t know yourself as much as anyone else knows you, how could you know and understand others sincerely. as a first step, I thought about my talent. It\'s a diligence. In my life, I steadily doing my best what I have to do. All I have, school, job etc. is due to diligence.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
I can read the depth that you incorporated in your work.
You just need to concentrate on choosing the correct patterns and terms to use.
It would make the composition clearer.
Take note of the suggestions below.
Let me know if you need more help.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I wouldn\'t think about myself often something like what I wanted, what I\'m good at, or what I love to.
>> I don\'t usually look at myself like the things that I love and I\'m good at.
It\'s so awkward to ask myself about me.
>> It\'s awkward for me to talk about myself.
But if you don\'t know yourself as much as anyone else knows you, how could you know and understand others sincerely.
>> However, if you don\'t know yourself as much as others do, how could you know and understand others sincerely?
as a first step, I thought about my talent.
>> To begin with, I started thinking about my talents.
It\'s a diligence.
>> For me, it\'s diligence.
In my life, I steadily doing my best what I have to do.
>> In my life, I always try to do my best in everything.
All I have, school, job etc. is due to diligence.
>> I am where I am right now because of my diligence.
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