Favorite season
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes winter your favorite season?
I want to do a lot of chllange and many experiance For winter season.
We have a lot of things and events in winter season.
Chrismas, hallowin, snowing days, new years,
Luner new year and my berthday.
We always play skietboard, ski, fighting snow, make A snowman for winter season.
We can do variety events and things in chrismas
And hallowin day.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I want to do a lot of chllange and many experiance For winter season.
>>> I want to do a lot of challenges and many experiences for winter season.
We have a lot of things and events in winter season.
>>> correct
Chrismas, hallowin, snowing days, new years, Luner new year and my berthday.
Chrismas, hallowin, snowing days, new years, Luner new year and my berthday.
>>> It includes Christmas, Halloween, snowing days, new years, Lunar new year and my birthday.
We always play skietboard, ski, fighting snow, make A snowman for winter season.
We always play skietboard, ski, fighting snow, make A snowman for winter season.
>>> We always play skateboarding, skiing, snow fighting, and making a snowman for winter season.
We can do variety events and things in chrismas And hallowin day.
>>> We can do variety events and things on Christmas and Halloween day.
>>> OR: We can do a variety of events and things on Christmas and Halloween day.
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