favorite singer

2011-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Last,k-pop has been the popularity as well as Southeeast Asia to Europe. Do you have been heard k-pop? It's a very fast-paced and has a strong sound. Presitative singers are 2NE1, superjunior and wondergirls. Do you know anyone among them? Personnelly I don't like the teenager stars. My favorite singer is Im jae-beom. He has a bass voice and sings sad lyrics. His hits song is a confession. The song has a woman's mind toward the representation of the real man is singing. Their music is unique and Intense. If you want your favorite artists, I want to present the recordings. Have a goood day! Good luck!

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Hello [이름]! Thank you for sharing some informations about K- pop group. I hope that we can talk more about them in our class. Have a nice day! -Teacher Kelly-   Last,k-pop has been the popularity as well as Southeeast Asia to Europe. >> K pop has become very popular in Southeast Asia and Europe.Do you have been heard k-pop? >> Have you heard of K- pop's songs??It's a very fast-paced and has a strong sound. >> The beat of their music is fast and they have a strong sound.Presitative singers are 2NE1, superjunior and wondergirls. >> Some K-pop groups include: 2NE1, Super Junior and Wondergirls.Do you know anyone among them? >> Do you know them?Personnelly I don't like the teenager stars. >> Personally, I don't like teenage stars.My favorite singer is Im jae-beom. >> Correct. He has a bass voice and sings sad lyrics. >> He has a bass voice and sings sad songs. His hits song is a confession. >> His hit song is Confession.The song has a woman's mind toward the representation of the real man is singing. >> The singer interprets what in a woman's mind. Their music is unique and Intense. >> Correct.If you want your favorite artists, I want to present the recordings. >> If you want to listen to their songs, I can tell you more about them. Have a goood day! >> Correct. >>OR: Have a nice day!Good luck! >>Correct. 

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