favorite singer
학생이 쓴 원문
Last,k-pop has been the popularity as well as Southeeast Asia to Europe.
Do you have been heard k-pop?
It's a very fast-paced and has a strong sound.
Presitative singers are 2NE1, superjunior and wondergirls.
Do you know anyone among them?
Personnelly I don't like the teenager stars.
My favorite singer is Im jae-beom. He has a bass voice and sings sad lyrics. His hits song is a confession.
The song has a woman's mind toward the representation of the real man is singing.
Their music is unique and Intense.
If you want your favorite artists, I want to present the recordings.
Have a goood day!
Good luck!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for sharing some informations about K- pop group. I hope that we can talk more about them in our class. Have a nice day!
-Teacher Kelly-
Last,k-pop has been the popularity as well as Southeeast Asia to Europe.
>> K pop has become very popular in Southeast Asia and Europe.Do you have been heard k-pop?
>> Have you heard of K- pop's songs??It's a very fast-paced and has a strong sound.
>> The beat of their music is fast and they have a strong sound.Presitative singers are 2NE1, superjunior and wondergirls.
>> Some K-pop groups include: 2NE1, Super Junior and Wondergirls.Do you know anyone among them?
>> Do you know them?Personnelly I don't like the teenager stars.
>> Personally, I don't like teenage stars.My favorite singer is Im jae-beom.
>> Correct.
He has a bass voice and sings sad lyrics.
>> He has a bass voice and sings sad songs.
His hits song is a confession.
>> His hit song is Confession.The song has a woman's mind toward the representation of the real man is singing.
>> The singer interprets what in a woman's mind. Their music is unique and Intense.
>> Correct.If you want your favorite artists, I want to present the recordings.
>> If you want to listen to their songs, I can tell you more about them. Have a goood day!
>> Correct.
>>OR: Have a nice day!Good luck!
>>Correct.
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