Favorite summer memories
학생이 쓴 원문
Before I had our second house and vegetable garden in the countryside, I hate summer season. That\'s because it\'s very hot and humid in summer. But after growing varied vegetables, I can enjoy fresh vegetables. Last summer we had a good harvest of corns. Steamed and boiled corners are my favorite snack in summer. Eating corns and watching movies, l have nothing to want. This year I will sow many grains of corns ~
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for completing your homework. I like corn too! ^o^
See you later~
See you later~
-T.Jhozel
Before I had our second house and vegetable garden in the countryside, I hate summer season.
>> Before we had our second house and vegetable garden in the countryside, I hated summer.
That\'s because it\'s very hot and humid in summer.
>> Correct!
But after growing varied vegetables, I can enjoy fresh vegetables.
>> Correct!
Last summer we had a good harvest of corns.
>> Last summer we had a good harvest of corn.
Steamed and boiled corners are my favorite snack in summer.
>> Steamed and boiled corn are my favorite snacks in the summer.
Eating corns and watching movies, l have nothing to want.
>> I want nothing more than to eat corn and watch movies.
This year I will sow many grains of corns ~
>> This year, I will sow many grains of corn.
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