favorite tale
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Let me tell monster killer hero Heraclass.
>> Let me talk about the monster hero killer, Hercules.
His father is the god zeus.
>> Hs father is the god, Zeus.
He is very strong.
>> Correct
Heraclass grasp the snake when 1age.
>> Hercules grabbed a snake when he was 1.
He grow older all of people can\'t fight.
>> When he grew older, all the people can’t fight.
First, he go to the cave to fight with lion.
>> First, he went to the cave to fight with a lion.
Then kill all the monster.
>> Then, he killed all the monsters.
When he die became gods.
>> When he died, he became a god.
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