Favorite television program
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not having much time with TV, but I spent the most time of whole day watching Youtube so, let me introduce my favorite channel. it is called \'Pingyego\', which collected million subscribers for about 2 month. It is kind of talk show hosted by very famous MC in Korea and usually the guests are the people who have a close relationship with MC so, I can feel the comfort and friendly atmosphere, which makes me feel healed or relax.
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Here\'s your corrected composition, Liz!
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Cheers,
Jean~~
What was the last program you watched on TV?
I\'m not having much time with TV, but I spent the most time of whole day watching Youtube so, let me introduce my favorite channel.
>> I don\'t usually watch TV, but I spend most of my time watching YouTube so let me introduce my favorite channel.
it is called \'Pingyego\', which collected million subscribers for about 2 month.
>> It\'s called \'Pingyego\', which racked up a million subscribers in about 2 months.
It is kind of talk show hosted by very famous MC in Korea and usually the guests are the people who have a close relationship with MC so, I can feel the comfort and friendly atmosphere, which makes me feel healed or relax.
>> It is a kind of talk show hosted by a very famous MC in Korea and usually, the guests are the people who have a close relationship with the MC so, I can feel the comfortable and friendly atmosphere, which makes me feel relaxed.
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