Favorite Topics
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Hello [이름]! I relate to you when it comes to choosing the questions to people I just met. I think that in whatever situation, we always have to be polite. Have a great day!~T.Dee
In Korea, there are two favorite topics when people meet new acquaintances.
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>>OR: In Korea, when people meet new acquaintances they talk about two common topics.
One of the topics is asking their age and another is asking the city which they are from.
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But we have to ask politely when we ask their age because asking the age can make people offended even in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: We have to ask politely when we ask their age because the person could be offended.
On the other hand, asking the city is quite safety than that.
>>On the other hand, asking the city is quite safer.
>>Very often, it is easier to ask which city a person came from.
In my experience, I could have a lot of conversation more naturally when I asked their city such as ‘How long does it take you to get here?’, ‘I’ve been there’ or ‘I have a friend who are living there’.
>>In my experience, I could have a more natural conversation with someone when I ask about their city. I usually ask questions such as \"How long does it take you to get here?\". I also include statements like ‘I’ve been there’ or ‘I have a friend who is living there’.
Because of this, I prefer to ask the city which they are from when I meet new acquaintances.
>>CORRECT!
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