Favorite tourist attraction
학생이 쓴 원문
The most favorite tourist attraction is Hongdae because there are lots of trendy and unique fashion shops get my attraction.
강사 첨삭
Hello Judy!
Thank you for sending me this homework answer! I hope that you enjoy shopping in Hongdae the next time you stop by there.
This is a short but meaningful sentence, very good!
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> My most favorite tourist attraction is Hongdae because there are lots of trendy and unique fashion shops there that get my attention.
Or: The most favorite tourist attraction for me is Hongdae because there are lots of trendy and unique fashion shops for my attraction.
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