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Good evening Gabby!
Did you have a nice day?
It was raining this afternoon and I was stay home a whole day.
We went to golf club in Thailand last winter. The subject is \"For the 60th anniversary of my birthday\".
WE sent 2 nights 3 days from golfclub and sent a night in Bangkok city.
The Bangkok city was complicated traffic. And taxi drivers taken much fee.
Anyway we is tourist.
We went on a tour, got a massagi.
Thailand\'s Palace is amazing, beautiful. Thailand foods was cheaps and delicious.
The traveling together all my family from start to end was first. Because mt daughter always went to abroad training in the winter.
She couldn\'t enjoy with our family. Always she had training or she had to play a golfgame.
She stops it and began lesson golf in spring 2019.
We really were important traveling in life. I look back that time happy.
Good bye Gabby!
See you tomorrow.
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Hi Suzan. Thank you for sharing this wonderful experience! See you in our class.
_ T. Gabby :)
Good evening Gabby!>> Correct.
Did you have a nice day?
Did you have a nice day?
>> Correct.
It was raining this afternoon and I was stay home a whole day.
It was raining this afternoon and I was stay home a whole day.
>> It was raining this afternoon so I just stayed at home the whole day.
We went to golf club in Thailand last winter.
We went to golf club in Thailand last winter.
>> We went to the golf club in Thailand last winter.
The subject is \"For the 60th anniversary of my birthday\".
>> This is for my 60th birthday.
WE sent 2 nights 3 days from golfclub and sent a night in Bangkok city.
WE sent 2 nights 3 days from golfclub and sent a night in Bangkok city.
>> We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights and another night in Bangkok city.
The Bangkok city was complicated traffic. And taxi drivers taken much fee.
The Bangkok city was complicated traffic. And taxi drivers taken much fee.
>> It was very traffik in Bangkok and the taxi drivers over charged.
Anyway we is tourist.
Anyway we is tourist.
>> Anyway we are tourists.
We went on a tour, got a massagi.
We went on a tour, got a massagi.
>> We went for a your and had a massage.
Thailand\'s Palace is amazing, beautiful. Thailand foods was cheaps and delicious.
Thailand\'s Palace is amazing, beautiful. Thailand foods was cheaps and delicious.
>> Thailand is a beautiful place and their foods are cheap and delicious.
The traveling together all my family from start to end was first. Because mt daughter always went to abroad training in the winter.
The traveling together all my family from start to end was first. Because mt daughter always went to abroad training in the winter.
>> It\'s fun to travel with the whole family because my daughter was always abroad for training during winter.
She couldn\'t enjoy with our family. Always she had training or she had to play a golfgame.
She couldn\'t enjoy with our family. Always she had training or she had to play a golfgame.
>> She couldn\'t enjoy so much with us because she has training or she needs to play golf.
She stops it and began lesson golf in spring 2019.
She stops it and began lesson golf in spring 2019.
>> She stopped it and began lesson in spring of 2019.
We really were important traveling in life. I look back that time happy.
We really were important traveling in life. I look back that time happy.
>> Travelling is really important and that makes me feel happy.
Good bye Gabby!
Good bye Gabby!
>> Correct.
See you tomorrow.
See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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