Favoritism whereby jobs are given to friends or relatives, are also forms of corruption. Are you awa

2016-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I’m quite sure that favoritism whereby jobs are given to friends or relatives is also forms of corruption. There have been many cases reported in certain companies where a special hiring has been made, bypassing a company’s ordinary hiring process. They were mostly to give a favor to a candidate who was a relative of an important person like the owner of the company or a socially high profile person. They have exerted their influence over the hiring, using his power and social position. One recent case that was on the news and brought about the public’s harsh criticism is that a lawmaker asked the owner of number one airline company to hire his nephew. And the company actually hired him, accepting his request. This could be regarded as influence peddling. Influence peddling is a serious issue all over the world, but especially in less developed countries. It is the illegal practice of using one’s influence in government or connections with persons in authority to obtain favors.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

Happy happy Friday. ^^
How was your holiday yesterday?

Did you go out with your family?

Thank you for sending in your composition.

It is common here in the Philippines that some of the people working for the government or big companies are their significant ones.

Hope that it will change this coming years.
See you. Take care.

Teacher Nina


I’m quite sure that favoritism whereby jobs are given to friends or relatives is also forms of corruption.

>> correct

There have been many cases reported in certain companies where a special hiring has been made, bypassing a company’s ordinary hiring process.

>> correct

They were mostly to give a favor to a candidate who was a relative of an important person like the owner of the company or a socially high profile person.

>> correct

They have exerted their influence over the hiring, using his power and social position.

>> correct

One recent case that was on the news and brought about the public’s harsh criticism is that a lawmaker asked the owner of number one airline company to hire his nephew.

>> Better: One recent case that was on the news and brought about the public’s harsh criticism is that a lawmaker asked the owner of the number one airline company to hire his nephew.

And the company actually hired him, accepting his request.

>> correct

This could be regarded as influence peddling.

>> correct

Influence peddling is a serious issue all over the world, but especially in less developed countries.

>> correct

It is the illegal practice of using one’s influence in government or connections with persons in authority to obtain favors

>> correct

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