Fear makes the wolf bigger than he is, but I\'m bigger than the wolf
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We are bigger than our fears!
~Teacher Eve.
Fear makes the wolf bigger than he is.
>> Correct!
If we have fear, we imagine what causes our fear bigger and bigger.
>> If we have fear, we imagine what causes our fear, it gets bigger.
It is just a small wolf, but we are afraid of a monster that our mind make.
>> It may just be a small wolf, but we are afraid of a monster that our mind can make.
Why do our mind make the wolf bigger?
>> Why do our mind makes the wolf bigger?
I think it is one of the strategies to save our life.
>> Correct!
If we don\'t have fear, we don\'t focus on the thing which puts us in danger.
>> If we don\'t have fear, we don\'t focus on the things which puts us in danger.
However, excessive fear is harmful because we can\'t see the essence.
>> Correct!
It means eventhough we face what we can overcome, we give up because of fear.
>> It means that even though we face what we can overcome, we give up because of fear.
Then, how can we overcome this?
>> Correct!
It is really hard for us not to be afraid of something.
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Therefore, we should try to see the essence of our fear.
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What kind of fear I feel, how deep it is, and why I feel it…….
>> What kind of fear am I feeling, how deep it is, and why I feel it...
The most important question is \'what makes me feel fear?\'
>> Correct!
If we can see the thing which gives us fear without exaggeration, we become bigger that the wolf.
>> If we can see the things which gives us fear without exaggeration, we become bigger than the wolf.
It is true that the wolf is big.
>> Correct!
However, don\'t forget we\'re bigger than him if we see the essence of our fear!
>> Correct!
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