Fear makes the wolf bigger than he is, but I\'m bigger than the wolf

2020-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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Fear makes the wolf bigger than he is. If we have fear, we imagine what causes our fear bigger and bigger. It is just a small wolf, but we are afraid of a monster that our mind make. Why do our mind make the wolf bigger? I think it is one of the strategies to save our life. If we don\'t have fear, we don\'t focus on the thing which puts us in danger. However, excessive fear is harmful because we can\'t see the essence. It means eventhough we face what we can overcome, we give up because of fear. Then, how can we overcome this? It is really hard for us not to be afraid of something. Therefore, we should try to see the essence of our fear. What kind of fear I feel, how deep it is, and why I feel it……. The most important question is \'what makes me feel fear?\' If we can see the thing which gives us fear without exaggeration, we become bigger that the wolf. It is true that the wolf is big. However, don\'t forget we\'re bigger than him if we see the essence of our fear!

강사 첨삭

HAPPY WEDNESDAY!

Amazing composition, [이름]!

I\'m excited to read more of these kinds of compositions from you.

We are bigger than our fears!

~Teacher Eve.    

Fear makes the wolf bigger than he is.

>> Correct!

If we have fear, we imagine what causes our fear bigger and bigger.

>> If we have fear, we imagine what causes our fear, it gets bigger.

It is just a small wolf, but we are afraid of a monster that our mind make.

>> It may just be a small wolf, but we are afraid of a monster that our mind can make.
 Why do our mind make the wolf bigger?

>> Why do our mind makes the wolf bigger?

I think it is one of the strategies to save our life.

>> Correct!

If we don\'t have fear, we don\'t focus on the thing which puts us in danger.

>> If we don\'t have fear, we don\'t focus on the things which puts us in danger.

However, excessive fear is harmful because we can\'t see the essence.

>> Correct!

It means eventhough we face what we can overcome, we give up because of fear.

>> It means that even though we face what we can overcome, we give up because of fear.
 Then, how can we overcome this?

>> Correct!

It is really hard for us not to be afraid of something.

>> Correct!

Therefore, we should try to see the essence of our fear.

>> Correct!

What kind of fear I feel, how deep it is, and why I feel it…….

>> What kind of fear am I feeling, how deep it is, and why I feel it...

The most important question is \'what makes me feel fear?\'

>> Correct!

If we can see the thing which gives us fear without exaggeration, we become bigger that the wolf.

>> If we can see the things which gives us fear without exaggeration, we become bigger than the wolf.
 It is true that the wolf is big.

>> Correct!

However, don\'t forget we\'re bigger than him if we see the essence of our fear!

>> Correct!

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