Fear of the mistake
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely I am really worried about making mistakes in English.
However now I am worried less than before.
What I worry most about is to repeat mistakes.
In other words, I feel ashamed when I make error or mistake, even though my teacher thought me and made corrections.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Your expressions are very open and clear.
You have gotten your message across in an excellent way.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Absolutely I am really worried about making mistakes in English.
>> I am absolutely worried about making mistakes in English.
However now I am worried less than before.
However now I am worried less than before.
>> However, now, I am worried less than before.
What I worry most about is to repeat mistakes.
What I worry most about is to repeat mistakes.
>> What I worry most about is repeating mistakes.
In other words, I feel ashamed when I make error or mistake, even though my teacher thought me and made corrections.
In other words, I feel ashamed when I make error or mistake, even though my teacher thought me and made corrections.
>> In other words, I feel embarrassed when I make an error or mistake even though my teacher teaches me and makes corrections.
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