Feasible
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi There! How’s your weekend? I had a good time on Saturday but I do not want to remember last Saturday night. I could not forget the clean sky. The first picture is the mountain near my home and others are my gathering.
My goals I can achieve this year are to make a seed money for my future. It is financially feasible considering my salary. I also want to make a big money to buy a new apartment.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, William!^^
Thank you for sharing those beautiful pictures. That scenery from the mountain is absolutely stunning!
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi There!
>>Hi there!
How’s your weekend?
>>Correct
OR: How\'s your weekend going?
I had a good time on Saturday, but I do not want to remember last Saturday night.
>>Correct
OR: I had a great Saturday, but I\'d prefer not to think about Saturday night.
I could not forget the clean sky.
>>I cannot forget the clear sky.
Thank you for sharing those beautiful pictures. That scenery from the mountain is absolutely stunning!
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi There!
>>Hi there!
How’s your weekend?
>>Correct
OR: How\'s your weekend going?
I had a good time on Saturday, but I do not want to remember last Saturday night.
>>Correct
OR: I had a great Saturday, but I\'d prefer not to think about Saturday night.
I could not forget the clean sky.
>>I cannot forget the clear sky.
OR: I can\'t get the clear sky out of my mind.
The first picture is the mountain near my home and others are my gathering.
The first picture is the mountain near my home and others are my gathering.
>>The first picture is of the mountain near my home, and the others are from my gathering.
My goals I can achieve this year are to make a seed money for my future.
>>One of my goals for this year is to save seed money for my future.
It is financially feasible considering my salary.
>>Correct
OR: With my salary, this is financially feasible.
I also want to make a big money to buy a new apartment.
>>I also want to make a lot of money to buy a new apartment.
My goals I can achieve this year are to make a seed money for my future.
>>One of my goals for this year is to save seed money for my future.
It is financially feasible considering my salary.
>>Correct
OR: With my salary, this is financially feasible.
I also want to make a big money to buy a new apartment.
>>I also want to make a lot of money to buy a new apartment.
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