Feb.05 .2012.
학생이 쓴 원문
What did you do lastweekend?
Well,I went hiking with my girlfriend because we want to lose our weight, in my case, on love handles.
And she have been nagging this issue from her mommy.
Her mommy said to her,"If you don't lose your weight,you must be dumped by your boyfriend"
We decided to go hinking the hill at the back of my house.
So i love kinds of exercise, i have quite a confidence in alot of exercise.
When i was young or when i served in the army.
I was confident in myself at that time.
But nowadays i'm not pretty sure about me.
Since i met my girl, i can't enjoy any exercise.
Because we had to see everyday.
What are the benefits of online shopping?
I think that it's very convenient and it doesn't bother us.
in my case,I've experienced some failed shopping online.
you know,It's not easy to get some goals right away.
Use online also,We could not get good result with first attempt.
I like this saying," You must not expect too much at your first attempt.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!! Good job. I can see a great improvement on how you wrote your compositions nowadays.
Just find time to review the corrections that I\'ve made.
Keep up the good work as always and take care!
Teacher Lara
What did you do lastweekend?>> CorrectWell,I went hiking with my girlfriend because we want to lose our weight, in my case, on love handles.
>> CorrectAnd she have been nagging this issue from her mommy.
>> And she has been nagging this matter to her mommy.Her mommy said to her,\"If you don\'t lose your weight,you must be dumped by your boyfriend\"
>> CorrectWe decided to go hinking the hill at the back of my house.
>> CorrectSo i love kinds of exercise, i have quite a confidence in alot of exercise.
>> So I love to exercise. I have a kind of confidence in doing strenuous exercise.When i was young or when i served in the army.
>> When I was young or when I served in the army.I was confident in myself at that time.
>> I was confident about myself at that time.But nowadays i\'m not pretty sure about me.
>> But nowadays I\'m not pretty sure about myself.Since I met my girl, i can\'t enjoy any exercise.
>> CorrectBecause we had to see everyday.
>> Because we have to meet everyday.What are the benefits of online shopping?
>> CorrectI think that it\'s very convenient and it doesn\'t bother us.
>> CorrectIn my case,I\'ve experienced some failed shopping online.
>> Correctyou know,It\'s not easy to get some goals right away.
>> As you know, it\'s not easy to get some good result right away.Use online also,We could not get good result with first attempt.
>> Using online also, we could not get good result on the first attempt.I like this saying,\" You must not expect too much at your first attempt.
>> Correct
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