Feb.05 .2012.

We try more of it,after then we must be stepped up about something. What is your preferred way to save money when food shopping? Definitely,I don't know in buying food's case because i'm not a housewife But i have one idea to save money. I've learned some skills by my parents who are simple guys. They also do a kindness to other people. My parent's always told me,"you also treat someone with kindness" Don't be afraid to give someone with kindness since i was young. I've never seen most of older people who are better than my father. My girlfriend also saw my father who are a very kind person and humble. He also doesn't try to show off what he has, what he does for a living. My father has taught me that don't care of studying but he had been insisted on reading books. So i read alot of books more than anybody else read. I'm pretty sure, Now i'm simpler than normal people. such as when i was in thr army, i saved in my account, 4,300,000 won for 2 years.

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending me your composition. Please review the corrections that I\'ve made. Keep up the good work as always and take care! Teacher Lara   We try more of it,after then we must be stepped up about something.>> CorrectWhat is your preferred way to save money when food shopping? >> CorrectDefinitely,I don\'t know in buying food\'s case because i\'m not a housewife But i have one idea to save money. >> Definitely, I don\'t know how to shop for food becaues I\'m not a housewife but I have an idea how to save money.I\'ve learned some skills by my parents who are simple guys. >> I\'ve learned some skills from my parents who are simple people.They also do a kindness to other people. >> They also show kindness to other people.My parent\'s always told me,\"you also treat someone with kindness\" >> CorrectDon\'t be afraid to give someone with kindness since i was young. >> CorretctI\'ve never seen most of older people who are better than my father. >> CorrectMy girlfriend also saw my father who are a very kind person and humble. >> CorrectHe also doesn\'t try to show off what he has, what he does for a living. >> CorrectMy father has taught me that don\'t care of studying but he had been insisted on reading books. >> CorrectSo i read alot of books more than anybody else read. >> So I read a lot of books more that anybody else.I\'m pretty sure, Now i\'m simpler than normal people. such as when i was in thr army, i saved in my account, 4,300,000 won for 2 years. >> Correct