Feb.07.2012.

2012-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi Teacher your voice back. I'm going to see my girlfriend again and we're going to study in english. I'm learning some skills to my girlfirend who is better than me in english. But i'm not sure that she also is being helpful. And nowadays my girlfriend and i have one matter that is choosing a dinner food and it could be very cold from tomorrow. I heard this new from the media but i'm not pretty sure about the media. Because Korea's media makes always mistakes to notice weathers. I heard this matter from my girlfriend, Canada makes also mistakes to expect its wathers. So i think of one issue that is subconscious. People want to get only outside things, such as what we have or what We get some goals, Only prefer to getting soemthing, but you can not see everything, such as people is what they do. We're sure and we find one answer there is only outside. I think i have one bias againist going to a coffee shop before. But nowadays i'm chancing to go there because of my gir

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Hi [이름]!! Good habits, once established are just as hard to break as are bad habits. -Robert Puller So make writing in English as your habit. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara   Hi Teacher your voice back.>> Hi Teacher, your voice is back. >> Hi Teacher, you already have your voice back.I\'m going to see my girlfriend again and we\'re going to study in english. >>  I\'m going to see my girlfriend again and we\'re going to study English.I\'m learning some skills to my girlfirend who is better than me in english. >> I\'m learning some skills from my girlfriend who is better than me in English.But i\'m not sure that she also is being helpful. >> CorrectAnd nowadays my girlfriend and i have one matter that is choosing a dinner food and it could be very cold from tomorrow. >> And nowadays my girlfriend and I have one matter to think about and that is choosing our food for dinner and it could be very6 cold tomorrow.I heard this new from the media but i\'m not pretty sure about the media. >> I heard this news from the media but I\'m not pretty sure if they are reliable.Because Korea\'s media makes always mistakes to notice weathers. >> Because Korea\'s media always makes mistakes in forcasting the weather.I heard this matter from my girlfriend, Canada makes also mistakes to expect its wathers. >> I heard this matter also from my girlfriend that in Canada they also made wrong weather forecast.So i think of one issue that is subconscious. >> So I think one reason of this is subconsciousness.People want to get only outside things, such as what we have or what We get some goals, >> People want to get only the outer part of the issue, such as what we want to have and gain from it.Only prefer to getting soemthing, but you can not see everything, such as people is what they do. >> Only thinking of what they can get but you can\'t see everything.We\'re sure and we find one answer there is only outside. >> We\'re sure that we can find answer only from the outside.I think i have one bias againist going to a coffee shop before. >> I think I was against to going to coffee shops before.But nowadays i\'m chancing to go there because of my gir >> But nowadays I\'m accepting the chance to go there because of  my girl.

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