Feb.07.2012.

2012-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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What are you going to do tomorrow? Especially,I go to a coffee shop with my girlfriend no matter what people say, I don't care about what people say something. Even though i bought a juice, i can stay in the coffee shop for a long time. And nowadays I like going to a coffee shop so i know hot chocoloate's flavor because i can't drink some coffee, If i drink coffee,i must have some insomnia but these days, i don't have insomnia anymore. I don't know why my situation has departed but i'm pretty sure, it has happened that situation since i met my girl. and nowadays i saw some independent coffee shop where they are located in alot of places. I heard this issue from my girlfriend Canada has also the same fasion. I think that independent coffee places increase that's why many people like drinking coffee. But i googled that which countries are the most consumed governments in coffee. The most consumed nation is Luxembourg. So my country is low consuming.

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HI [이름]!!! I also like drinking coffee but not the black one. I prefer white coffee and cappucino. I think those type of coffees will not make you insomiac. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara   What are you going to do tomorrow? >> CorrectEspecially,I go to a coffee shop with my girlfriend no matter what people say, >> I will go to a coffee shop with my girlfriend no matter what people say.I don\'t care about what people say something. >> I don\'t care if people will say something.Even though i bought a juice, i can stay in the coffee shop for a long time. >> Even if I only ordered for a glass of juice, I can stay in the coffee shop for long hours.An nowadays I like going to a coffee shop so i know hot chocoloate\'s flavor because i can\'t drink some coffee, >> Nowadays, I like going to coffee shops so I would know some hot choco flavors because I can\'t drink coffee.If i drink coffee,i must have some insomnia but these days, i don\'t have insomnia anymore. >> If I drink coffee, I\'ll be insomiac for a few days but I\'m not having insomnia anymore.I don\'t know why my situation has departed but i\'m pretty sure, it has happened that situation since i met my girl. >> I don\'t know why a sudden change of my ways but I\'m pretty sure it all happened since I met my girl.and nowadays i saw some independent coffee shop where they are located in alot of places. >> Nowadays, I saw some independent coffee shops located in many places.I heard this issue from my girlfriend >> CorrectCanada has also the same fasion. >> Canada also has the same trend.I think that independent coffee places increase that\'s why many people like drinking coffee. >> Correct But i googled that which countries are the most consumed governments in coffee. >> But I googled what coutry has the most consumed coffee drinkers.The most consumed nation is Luxembourg. >> CorrectSo my country is low consuming. >> So my country is one of the lowest number of coffee drinkers.

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