Feb 22th, 2022
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Which business do you think was totally damaged/affected by this pandemic?
>>I guess we all already know the answer since we see and hear the news about it everyday.
The first one is definitely travel-related industry, especially the Airlines industry. We can easily know the fact by checking the Stock Market. For instance, as you can see the stock price of the Delta Air Lines, which was $62 right before the spread of COVID Pandemic, but the price nose-dived afterward. Even though the stock price recovered for the past 2 years up to nearly 70% of the figure in Januaury 2020, we don’t see that the Air Line is on the right track. One of the major causes that enabled the stock price to surge is due to the monetary policy of the Biden Administration and the FRB. It seemed to work well. But, now, we are starting to suffer from The Inflation that we’ve never experienced in recent 40 years.
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Hi, U [이름]!
That is sad, but true. It affected a lot of businesses as well as the working people. We all suffered so much, so hopefully this will end very soon.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I guess we all already know the answer since we see and hear the news about it everyday.
>> Correct!
The first one is definitely travel-related industry, especially the Airlines industry.
The first one is definitely travel-related industry, especially the Airlines industry.
>> Correct!
We can easily know the fact by checking the Stock Market.
>> Correct!
For instance, as you can see the stock price of the Delta Air Lines, which was $62 right before the spread of COVID Pandemic, but the price nose-dived afterward.
>> For instance, as you can see the stock price of the Delta Air Lines, which was $62 right before the spread of COVID Pandemic, but the price nosedived afterward.
Even though the stock price recovered for the past 2 years up to nearly 70% of the figure in Januaury 2020, we don’t see that the Air Line is on the right track.
>> Even though the stock price recovered for the past 2 years up to nearly 70% of the figure in January 2020, we don’t see that the Airline is on the right track.
One of the major causes that enabled the stock price to surge is due to the monetary policy of the Biden Administration and the FRB.
>> Correct!
It seemed to work well.
>> Correct!
But, now, we are starting to suffer from The Inflation that we’ve never experienced in recent 40 years.
>> Correct!
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