Feburary.10.2012.

2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Do you think you are better than most people? Yes.Especially i m one of a kind person. My mind is very sensitive or strong what i work something. I'm pretty sure, i have a relationship better than most people. But i'm careful of making some people deeply because my parents have taught this relationship. People around me who like me that's why i'm a people person and i have some leadership to solve what we have something. What makes you the happiest these days? Nowadays,I am so happy because of my girlfriend. She and i have the same pattern and something in common. Could you remember teacher? I asked you something such as how many people were this class because I wanted to know Si-yang's attending. She looked like very intelligent and kind a woman. I'm sure, i m not intelligent so i always want to meet a girl who is intelligent. My girl is intellient and very kind, understandable. but she is not easy a girl who tell me that reasons. I think we have open mind.

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Hi [이름]!! I totally aprreciate your consistency to learn. Just continue to explore more of you skills. Be mindful about my corrections. Have fun. Stay motivated. Teacher Lara   Do you think you are better than most people? >> CorrectYes.Especially I\'m one of a kind person. >> CorrectMy mind is very sensitive or strong what i work something. >> My mind is very sensitive and strong whenever I am working on something.I\'m pretty sure, i have a relationship better than most people. >> I\'m pretty sute that I have a good relationship better than most people.But i\'m careful of making some people deeply because my parents have taught this relationship.>> [ I can\'t understand what you\'re trying to point out here [이름]]People around me who like me that\'s why i\'m a people person and i have some leadership to solve what we have something.>> People around me tend to like me because of my leadership in solving some issues.What makes you the happiest these days? >> What makes you the happiest person these days?Nowadays,I am so happy because of my girlfriend. >> CorrectShe and i have the same pattern and something in common. >> CorrectCould you remember teacher? >> Could you remember a certain teacher?I asked you something such as how many people were this class because I wanted to know Si-yang\'s attending.>> I asked you something about people who are having this kind of class because I wanted to know if Si-yang is attending it.She looked like very intelligent and kind a woman. >> She looks like a very intelligent and kind woman.I\'m sure, i m not intelligent so i always want to meet a girl who is intelligent. >> I\'m sure that I\'m not intelligent so I always want to meet an intelligent girl.My girl is intellient and very kind, understandable. but she is not easy a girl who tell me that reasons. >> CorrectI think we have open mind. >> I think we have to open our mind.

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