feedback- compass

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

hi Ms.shy. nice to talking to you. i can not express about you in english very well, but i hope to know that i do like you as you check my setences and feedback my expressions. it's the point what i want to have english class like. thank you. you told me that i spoke in english slowly. if i could'nt speech faster, plz. be patient.^-^ i try to speak faster. this is a compass. it's for telling directions. it's marked with E,N,S,& W. it can help people to locate some places with a map. it's usually used by travelers, pilots, captains of ships. it's not rainy yet, but the rain is coming soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]!!! You are very much welcome…^^Don’t worry about your pacing, I understand and I want you to take your time… I really like you, too. You really want to learn and that attitude will take you far in speaking English someday.. Keep it up! See you in class! T. Shy hi Ms.shy. nice to talking to you. >> Hi Ms. [Name]! Nice to talking to you.i can not express about you in english very well, but i hope to know that i do like you as you check my setences and feedback my expressions. >> I can not express myself in English very well, but I hope you know that I do like you as you check my sentences and give feedback with my expressions.it's the point what i want to have english class like.  >> It’s how I want my English class to be like thank you.  >> Thank you. (You’re welcome!)you told me that i spoke in english slowly. >> You told me that I spoke in English slowly. (correct)if i could'nt speech faster, plz. be patient.^-^  >> If I couldn’t speak faster, please be patient.^-^ i try to speak faster. >> I will try to speak faster.this is a compass.  >> correctit's for telling directions.  >> correctit's marked with E,N,S,& W. >> correctit can help people to locate some places with a map. >> correct (nice sentence^^)it's usually used by travelers, pilots, captains of ships. >> it's usually used by travelers, pilots, and captains of ships.it's not rainy yet, but the rain is coming soon. >> correct  

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