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[이름],
You and I share the same sentiment about our first day of class, [이름].
I was trying to be friendly at first but it seemed that you were disinterested and were just giving me short, curt answers that were, in American standards, rude.
For example, when you kept saying \"I know\" or non-words like \"mm-hmm\", and that was rather insulting on my part. I can assure you that my accent is impeccable compared to most. You must mean my \"intonation\".
I\'m not exactly sure what you are trying to express as my corrections are on point. In addition, your writing also needs some work. You need to learn how to write in a way that doesn\'t sound so insulting and confrontational.
There is more that you should learn in using English so I would recommend for you to keep an open mind and not be too proud since you need to work on your pronunciation, grammar and speaking skills.
Teacher Charlie
Hi, Charlie.
I had a class with you for the first time today.
Do you have something upset today?
Your voice sounds too down and angry . It means that I didn\'t get any good impression on you because of your voice tone and accent.
Moreover,I looked through your feedback with some expectation.
However, I am sure there are somethign wrong about your feedback.
You wrote some sentences I didn\'t say and your feedback was not very specific. So, it made me terribly embarrassed.
Unfortunately, I have to say that you should develop your listening skills if you wanna give students right feedbacks.
Even though today was the \"first\" class with you, it was the most terrible one I\'ve ever got in POWER ENGLISH.
>> Hi Charlie,
Today was our first class and I was wondering whether something happened to you today that made you sound like you were upset or down. I\'m afraid your tone or intonation left a bad taste in my mouth.
Moreover, I read through the feedback that you gave and was not impressed since, in my opinion, there are some mistakes. I\'m sure you must have misunderstood some of the things I\'ve said but to be able to give better student feedback, do try to listen more attentively.
I may sound insulting at this point but our first day of class is the most unsatisfactory that I\'ve ever had in PowerEnglish.
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